::: REVISING YOUR WORK :::

This list is based on the notes that I made while marking your assignments. Please read the list carefully and make sure that you understand the expectations outlined here:

1. Underline the title of the novel or play.
2. Focus on producing clear, concise writing : pay attention to sentence structure and omit all unnecessary words.
3. Assume that your reader is familiar with the novel. Do not over-explain.
4. Be selective about the quotations you use : do not use quotations as "filler."
5. Do not make sweeping generalizations in your writing. Always be as specific as possible when referring to ideas, concepts and literary works.
6. Refer to the notes you took in class and the handouts I gave you to ensure correct use of MLA style.
7. Always use the literary present.

::: Editing Short Forms :::

General :
gr - grammar, including tense shift, word choice, diction, sentence structure (run-on, fragment), pronoun reference, articles, repetition of words and ideas, paragraph structure, etc.
p - punctuation, including correct use of the colon and semicolon, correct punctuation in dialogue, etc.
sp - spelling errors and typos

The Details:
ww - wrong word
wc - word choice
wdy - wordy
d - diction (i.e., formal or informal)
ss - faulty sentence structure, garbled syntax
sf - sentence fragment
ro - run-on
MLA - in-text citations, blended quotations, the use of underlining and quotation marks to indicate the title of a text, etc.
rwd - reword
awk - awkward
t - problem with tense (e.g., literary present)
ts - tense shift


Over the next few months, we will focus on various aspects of writing. I've devised a rough schedule for this; please let me know if there is a topic you'd like to add.

Nov => focus on sentence structure and punctuation
Dec => focus on diction
Jan => revising your work
Feb => essay structure ---> creating effective transitions
Mar => review language skills