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ESSAY WRITING => THE POINT/PROOF/COMMENT MODEL FOR BODY PARAGRAPHS


The P/P/C model works well for beginning writers. Its principles are easy to remember. Also it illustrates clearly that a single body paragraph has a single main idea and that every other sentence in the paragraph must be linked to that main idea by developing the point, providing textual evidence to support it and analyzing its significance.

Point is the argument, or the claim, that directs the conversation of the paragraph. The point is almost always the topic sentence.

Proof is a textual detail that supports the central point in the paragraph. Most arguments require more than one example, illustration or piece of evidence to convince the reader. The writer must explain each illustration in concrete detail, not simple “stack the proof,” so that the reader can comprehend the connection between the writer’s point, evidence and thesis.

Comment is the part that makes a clear, logical connection between the point and the proof.


Here is an example from a non-fiction essay:

Although the bald eagle is still listed as an endangered species, its ever-increasing population is very encouraging. According to ornithologist Jay Sheppard, “The bald eagle seems to have stabilized its population, at the very least, almost everywhere” (96). We can assume then that there is hope for the longevity of this majestic bird.

[Point:] Although the bald eagle is still listed as an endangered species, its ever-increasing population is very encouraging. [signal phrase:] According to ornithologist Jay Sheppard, [Proof:] “The bald eagle seems to have stabilized its population, at the very least, almost everywhere.” [in-text citation:] (96). [Comment:] We can assume then that there is hope for the longevity of this majestic bird.